Entry #4- Reading Response

 The article was an entertaining and very interesting read. The writer addressed a major issue impacting our societies worldwide (especially western society) in a whimsical manner. This made it an easy read, but notwithstanding he brought his point clearly across and I think his quaint analogies forced home his view point even more. Personally, I enjoyed the reading due to the fact that the articles sentiments and opinions held by myself. The farce idea of beauty purported by a few who has the resources needed to be global influencers worldwide have seriously damaged the self esteem of our women and destroyed happy homes and marriages. From the foundation of times we've always been taught that true beauty comes from within and outward looks count minimal. Don't agree with me? Then answer me this, how many times have good looks ever saved a relationship? The idea of all women pursuing this common appearance would be quite ridiculous and would take away from their own personal individuality (what makes them themselves). With all this advancement in Technology might as well we replace them with Robots, No? Due to this unnecessary pressure placed on women to reach this unattainable ideal causes them to suffer from depression, low self esteem which then operates as a gateway for other serious issues such as suicide and drug addiction. This in turn puts a strain on their relationships and other aspects of their personal lives. This is something we as a society needs to address sooner than later. The writer however could have developed his introduction a bit more by giving more background information on the issue and establish his purpose for writing. 

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